English homework help

This is the final draft of the final report. I received comments from my classmates in the last peer review of the draft 3.

There is only little or no content revision. However, according to the feedback I received, it seems to be better to separate the conclusions and recommendations and the paragraphs could be subdivide or separated. Now, we should focus more on the format or style of the final report than on the contents.

I uploaded the original and the comments.

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